Thursday, June 08, 2006

Cracking Open a Sentence Together

Here was our seemingly EMPTY sentence:

Yesterday, it was hot.

Here is our joint effort on cracking this open:

Yesterday was the hottest day of the summer. I felt like my mind was going to boil. The sun was beating my head. I put on aloe vera lotion to try to cool off. I smelled the nasty scent of the suntan lotion. It was
stickier than honey.

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